mad_eponine ([info]mad_eponine) wrote,
@ 2008-03-12 02:01:00
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poetry (while) on buses
I whipped this up the other day. It can't be any worse than Poetry on Buses, har har.
Metro route 44, 11:53 to 11:54AM

I saw Corprew today
outside the window of my bus.
He was standing at the corner
stuffing a laptop or something like that
into his compact bag.                                       5
He looked intent.

I thought for a second that he might get on my bus
but it pulled away
without him aboard.                                        10
I would have liked to say hello
and inquire what he was doing.
I wondered why he was on campus;
I wondered where he was going.
Had he eaten yet?                                          15

Corprew's a mysterious guy
with his fingers in many pies.
Nobody really knows when Corprew comes and goes.
He moves as he pleases.                                    20

As for me, quite ironically,
I got off at the next stop
barely in time for class.
No time to talk to friends;                                25
a slave to the watch upon my hand.
Unaware of Corprew's latest crimes.



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[info]jtglover
2008-03-12 10:49 am UTC (link)
He looked intent.

He looked very internet.

Nice poem, otherwise.

:)

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[info]meestagoat
2008-03-12 12:54 pm UTC (link)
I enjoy your strategic use of line numbers.

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(Anonymous)
2008-03-12 06:21 pm UTC (link)
This is AWESOME. You have whipped the ass of those Metro poetasters.

I could see TMBG setting this to music.

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(Anonymous)
2008-03-12 06:25 pm UTC (link)
Oh, hi, it's SJ, btw.

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[info]dannyman
2008-03-12 06:30 pm UTC (link)
Awesome.

Maybe you can make your own Poetry on Buses signage and sneak those into the system.

Did you do the line numbers manually or via editor macro? Inquiring minds get hot about such things.

Thanks.

Love,
-daniel

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[info]mad_eponine
2008-03-19 03:12 am UTC (link)
I was lame and did the line numbers manually.

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[info]rwx
2008-03-12 07:25 pm UTC (link)
Hey.

I was coming from a meeting about project Jackalope in Suzzallo. I was probably just getting my laptop into it's new impact resistant casing.

We should chat, as there are many fine geospatial related things we must talk about, but there must be a waiting period for Jackalope fruition first.

you have a mac and a GPS unit, right?

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[info]mad_eponine
2008-03-19 03:13 am UTC (link)
yes and yes... although I took apart my latest gps unit and accidentally mangled the antenna connector. no matter, i'll fix it up somehow.

also: i am always ready to tlak geospatially!

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[info]exmanhater
2008-03-12 08:09 pm UTC (link)
wait! you don't wear a watch!! UNREALISTIC POETRY ALERT! PHONY! Hey look, this guy's a big PHONY!

:)

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[info]rwx
2008-03-13 05:11 am UTC (link)
he is cake.

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[info]rimrunner
2008-03-13 06:53 pm UTC (link)
The cake is a lie.

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[info]biznamshiznit
2008-03-15 08:08 pm UTC (link)
Whoa. This rocks.

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